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"The bastard survived, huh?"            

 Before Paul or Tal'Shen had time to react, Maya's blade was at Paul's throat, pushing him to the back of the wall. Maya's face was inches away from Paul's, her teeth bared.


"This is what Lysanna, first born of Neiptiún, sends for battle? A tadpole?" The unearthly high-pitched laugh sent a chill down Paul's spine.


"Paul, This Is Our Chance, You Must Distract Her!"  Tal'Shen's voice ringed in Paul's head, and he felt imbued with bravery...or blind stupidity.

 

"You bitch! A few minutes ago I thought you're a friend , now you' re the enemy? Just who or what are you?"


"What I am? Well, love, certainly more than a woman"

 

Horrified, Paul watched transfixed as Maya's hair morphed into slimy tentacles.

 

"Brace Yourself! Here She Comes!"

 

A flame-colored tentacle was thrusted into Paul's ear. He screamed, so did Tal'Shen. The room disappeared, and now two beings were inside Paul, trying to take charge.


"Where is she?"

"You Won't Know Where Is Mother!"

"DON'T YOU DARE TO HIDE HER FROM ME!"

 

The tentacle dugged deeper into Paul's skull. Memories that weren't his flashed across his mind. The wave of images finally stopped at the sight of a derelict house standing near a riverbank.

 

"NO!"

 

Maya withdrew the tentacle from Paul's ear, a crimson river seeping out of it. The room came back into view, and Paul saw a triumphant smile on Maya's semblance. Her Blade was swung high into the air; Paul closed his eyes, dreading the moment of the strike. But the sound of struggle reached his ears. Tal'Shen had reacted just in time; Paul's tentacles were wrapped around Maya's arm, stopping the blade inches away from his skull.

 

"You dare to fight a descendant of the Dorch Muir?" Maya growled.

 

"You Will Never Have Mother's Talisman!"

 

"Listen to me, tadpole. After I'm done with you, I'll pay a visit to my dear  sister, and send her to a watery grave! The power of Neiptiún will be passed on to me and I shall rule Earth!"


"You Won't Have It!"

"Who's going to stop me? You and your feeble host? I'm stronger than you!"


Paul summoned what little courage he had left.

"Stronger? Yes, but not smart enough!"


He plunged a knife he had grabbed from Maya's tool belt into her owner's stomach. Maya screeched with pain, releasing Paul. He bolted towards the door, avoiding the pursuing tentacles. Closing the door on  time, Paul  ran towards the exit.


"Where to, Tal'Shen?"

"Mother...We Must Find Mother"

Entry for chapter 5 of :iconodysseyproject:

421 words. I hope I'm on time. I had to type this on my blackberry, since I coudln't use my computer for a while. Eh, I don't know if this deserves a mature content....with the "bitch" and "tentacle in his ear"...I guess not :P

Neiptiún....I played a bit with the term. I wanted to put Neptune, but found a scottish-gaelic traductor and it sounded a bit more cooler. "Dorch" and "Muir" are also scottish-gaelic terms, and together they mean "Dark Ocean"
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Solum-Ipsum Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Catfight + Tentacle Porn = Squidfight
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
:D while writing the tentacle part...I thought "Heavens, this looks as if it came out from a smut manga"
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Solum-Ipsum Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*hides guro manga collection*
:iconeheheplz: Smut... yes, of course it is! Ahahahahaaa~!
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
:P yeaaah, I'm not familiar with all the...varieties of manga :P
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Solum-Ipsum Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:pat: Cherish your innocence, my girl... while you still have some left. :mwahaha:
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Solum-Ipsum Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You Forgot To Capitalize Every Single Word By Tal'Shen. This Cannot Be Overlooked.

I think you've brought out the most from the least. Good story. :thumbsup:
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
heh, Ijust capitalized all of them for the heck of it :P
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
hahahaha! True....but I was far too lazy to do it :P
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voiceless-song Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Good story. I likt the changable pace.
Here's just a litlte problem: Paul doesn't sound like a 30-old man.
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks for the comment...yeah...my problem with this is that I can't give a firm voice to Paul...
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